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The Switcheroo Pt 5

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Woohoo pt 5 is here!!

Here is a commission for *blitzgundam

Its tenten and Lunamaria or is it Maria and Lunatenten?? hmmm

Hope you like it
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Their faces and heads are really well-done. Also props for doing full-body drawings, and giving it a fitting background to give them a suitable environment <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

However, I find the proportions slightly odd-looking. Tenten's upper body looks fine, but her legs look too short. Perhaps it's the perspective, but her legs and feet look too small for her upper body.

With Lunamaria, on first glance, I had trouble figuring out her pose <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..." /> She kind of has the same problem as Tenten, her upper body too wide and her lower body too small and thin. Also, her bum has that lump that I don't think should be there <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..." />

I appreciate that you're creative with poses, but the way her arms are positioned just looks odd... especially with how her head is turned almost face-on to you, and her arms are behind her head, but her body is turned sideways. The way her legs are even suggest her bottom half is turning away from you, so the result is that her body looks really twisted in an uncomfortable way... The line defining her breast also kind of add on to the confusion, because when looking at her body, it's about the right place; but referencing from her head, it looks like it's in the middle of her chest <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..." /> The line defining her armpit looks a bit odd as well (at first I thought it was for her other boob but that made no sense >_< )

Lastly, Luna's left arm looks strangely connected to her body as well, both the angle confusion and how it looks kind of curved (which shouldn't be the case for arms...)